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HotelKatz

Ah! my goddess: What if

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vanagandr    209
vanagandr

Truth to be told, although the manga made an attempt to explain what happened between Tyr and Hild, it did absolutely nothing to explain where Ansuz came from. Not literally though, just how she was involved with Tyr and especially whether she was the one who supervised their Test. Sure, we can all speculate and fill in the gaps, but that's not exactly a substitute for a proper explanation. As such most of those assumptions can heavily depend on each individual reader, and picking one version as canon is next to impossible. That's probably why the whole subject kind of interests me, and it would've been nice to see what others think as well ;)

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HotelKatz    46
HotelKatz

I wrote the goddesses comments. Let me know if I should expand on them

 



The screen went blank.

 

“Didn’t care much for it. Too much like talking heads,” Urd quickly said. “Needed more action or better structure.”

 

“Aren’t your soap operas like that?” Skuld asked. “I thought it was neat how one possible version of them acted. Them willing to talk, but it could have gone better.”

 

“I agree. Seeing Hild act in a friendly manner almost makes me forget how terrifying she is,” Peorth said. Then with a smirk, she added, “Could it be that your shows have sex appeal and this doesn’t?”

 

Urd threw a pillow at Peorth angrily said, “They’re my parents, you nitwit!”

 

Belldandy looked at Keiichi and said, “I thought it was sweet, didn’t you?”

 

“Kinda bittersweet, if you ask me. So close, yet so far. I probably would have gone mad if I was in either of their place,” Keiichi answered.

 

I have some plot ideas for when I take this fic out of hiatus. Only about 2 or so. I can even write a short blub for them.

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HotelKatz    46
HotelKatz

Next chapter will be a bit of a continuation of super hero Keiichi.

 

Will have Disguised Hagal trying to turn Urd into a demon through Keiichi using the demonic portion of Urd's donated power and Skuld revealing Hagal's disguise via boob-glomping. Will make sure to credit van for coming up with that idea.

 

soo... Should I have Skuld merely mention that her 'big sis' feels different in that department or ask why her 'big sis' feels lesser for some reason? The latter is intended on making Hagal mad enough to go on the attack.

 

also, for this chapter for Urd, I'm going with Lightning=divine Fire=demonic for sake of making it easier for writing purposes.

 

...Huh. Come to think of it, this plot might be a useful one, if I decide to have Urd eventually be able to use both sides of her power. She'd be using Keiichi to build up her tolerance, so she doesn't get power-drunk or controlled by her demonic-half.

 

 

Hey, it's either that or a continuation to the one where Belldandy get injected with succubus DNA. I'd write a chapter where Belldandy manages to eject the foreign material from herself... only for it to form into a demonic Belldandy, who then gets kidnapped by Hild. Welsper also gets kidnapped, but it's implied to be not a happy end for him, as Hild goes ont on a bit of a speech that says that a demonic Belldandy that can be made loyal to her is far better than a demon so in love with Belldandy that they curse themselves into a cat form.

and what's worse is that somehow, that the demonic Belldandy doesn't trigger the System force. In fact, with a little effort and planning, she can use the system force against Urd and Skuld, but not the original Belldandy.

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HotelKatz    46
HotelKatz

Chapter's up.

 

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8502429/60/Ah-my-goddess-What-if

 

Moving it from GDoc to FFN seems to remove the Italics for some reason. So I had to go and put back the italics for the chapter. I've also reached the point where I typed Belldandy so many times over the years, her name is starting to barely resemble a word at the moment.

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HotelKatz    46
HotelKatz

Going on the suggestion of this post

 

So how should the food rebel?

 

Merely float and attack?

Merge and attack?

Or both?

I kind want any and all fish dishes to merge together to form the creature of the black lagoon. That's as far as I have planned.

Hey, would it be worth a laugh if after the Creature forms, so Skuld immediately picks up Urd and offers her as a sacrifice?

At most, I see two chapters out of this idea. Maybe three if I stretch it.

Ending will either be Skuld and Urd miraculously ending the threat and serving the food or they drag everyone to eat out and refuse to answer why.

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IdiAmeanDada    47
IdiAmeanDada

definitely both.  Could start with some of it just trying to get away.  Then as they become larger, they become more aggressive.  And Skuld sacrificing Urd would be hilarious!

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HotelKatz    46
HotelKatz

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M84N4csoxpxuhLKTn40I34eXkK4u6CY1qQZ3MjkI3nA/edit?usp=sharing


Here's chapter 63. It'll be put up on September 22 and then the fic will be put on hiatus.

 

Spoiler

Here are my thoughts.

I wanted the first sign that Hild took control of the story to be the disclaimer. Should I make any changes to the disclaimer to make it more obvious?

 

Here is a list of ideas for the goddesses and Keiichi to be sent to.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UzBX0PYxPI9s6zW2kPFzvG9SiqBQ86JOEq6jVMEmSiQ/edit?usp=sharing

 

Edited by HotelKatz
forgot to put the link to the chapter. I am an Eye Dee ten Tee.

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Keiichi Morisato    423
Keiichi Morisato

It's about time I started participating in these fanfic forums. I'm looking forward to checking out some of the great content everyone has been creating for the community. Will post my comments on your work, @HotelKatz.

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