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Ah! My goddess Fic ideas

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solopy567    23
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Ok, here is the general idea that popped into my mind.

 

So, Belldandy comes down to grant the wish of an old, yet kind hearted yakuza boss in Nekomi. Initially surprises by her appearance, the two sit down to talk. He tells her how he worked tirelessly to keep these unfortunate boys and girls off the street and give them a place to call home and belong. However, his history as an ex violent Yakuza member has old gangs still after him and all he cares for. He is tired, and probably dying, and after being touched by her kind words and heart, wishes for her to "succeed me in my place until you find one who is worthy of succeeding yourself." he is surprised when it is granted, and goes to introduce her to the the rest of the members, keeping her status as a goddess a secret. The members are instantly taken with her, and accept it.

Meanwhile, Morisato Keiichi is an unfortunate college student who, after running out of money, decides to throw his lot in with that yakuza group in desperation. Upon meeting Belldandy for the first time, he is dazzled by her.

The old man then decides to pick a tour guide and bodyguard for the lady, and picks Keiichi for the job. And so, Belldandy and Keiichi meet for the first time.

They get along very well, and they hit it off without even realizing. That evening, members of a rival gang come to assassinate the old man, not realizing he is not there. They attack Belldandy and Keiichi, and the goddess defeats them. The group's members walk in to see the defeated members, and paint Keiichi as some badass, crouching tiger hidden dragon guy who kicks serious ass. He is then officially kept as her bodyguard from then on.

Funny things happen like all of Belldandy's innocent words like 'keep the streets clean of trash' come out as insanely intimidating due to her natural wide smile.

Urd comes to visit, and the members come to call her Anego.

Skuld arrives too, and gets mad when they refer to her as 'Little Lady'.

Shenanigans, basically.

 

A different hilarious idea I had is that one day, Keiichi gets rid of all his porn mags. However, Tamiya and Otaki come and give him some boxes with other motorcycle magazines in there, which he puts in his porn drawer. Belldandy comes upon them while cleaning one day, and unfortunately some very, very risque magazines with NAKED BUFF MEN mixed themselves in with the magazines.

Poor Belldandy is shocked to the core, and gets the wild idea that Keiichi might have preferred a god to stay with him, and goaded by Urd, she decides she will try to charm him with her more...manly side.

The next morning, Keiichi gets up to see Belldandy, now THE MIGHTY THOR making him breakfast which is a GIGANTIC FAT STEAK.

Keiichi thinks she is having a phase, and accompanies her on a...date. Belldandy then tries to appeal to him with her MANLY CHARM by taking him to the gym and steak houses and arcade and MANLY activities. Poor Kei has an aneurysm from confusing.

Urd laughs her ass off. Hild laughs her ass of. All of Heaven collectively facepalms.

Highlights include Holy Bell, now TACO BELL. Bell can apparently blacksmith.

Edited by solopy567

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Boe409    5
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Quote

Highlights include Holy Bell, now TACO BELL.

 "Come forth, Taco Bell!"

*Fart sound as Taco Bell emerges*

Keiichi just stares for a solid minute.

"I never thought about this before, but where exactly do angels emerge... from?"

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solopy567    23
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A few more ideas that popped into my mind, for the hell of it.

 

Ah! My Goddess: Civil War

 

Obviously inspired by Marvel, it is a story in which Celestine was never jailed and actually entered the Heavenly Council after his mentoring of Belldandy. He had always advocated against the cruelty of the Judgment Gate, but a lack of recent cases gave him no leverage. When Belldandy and Keiichi go through the Gate and the footage of what happened within is presented to the council, Celestine's complaints become all the more attractive. Soon enough, his cause gathers a surprising amount of followers from both civilian gods as well as many members of the council itself. Soon enough, Heaven becomes split between two parties: the pro-Gate and the anti-Gate factions. Unfortunately, tensions begin to escalate and soon enough all-out war seems to be inevitable. Even more unfortunately, the Morisato household is not able to evade involvement. While it seems more than obvious that they will all side with the pro-Gate faction, things changes when Keiichi is inadvertently taken prisoner by the anti-Gate faction. Celestine meets with Belldandy and promises to ensure his safety, and she finds herself torn between her loyalties to Heaven and her loyalties to Keiichi. In the end, she chooses Keiichi and sides with the anti-Gate faction. However, in order to protect Skuld and her name in Heaven, Urd has no choice but to side with the pro-Gate faction. With the Morisato house now cut in the middle, the story begins from there. 

 

Belldandy the Yandere

 

Basically, one day Belldandy is infected with a strange, unknown virus that twists and corrupts her sweet love for Keiichi into something incredibly disturbing. At first, people think she is just being extra clingy, but when she begins to threaten Sayoko with extreme bodily harm, Urd and Skuld can't help but become increasingly suspicious that something very weird is going on here.

 

Heaven Children

 

Inspired by both Clannad and Wolf Children. Tragedy strikes the household when Belldandy gives birth to twins (a boy and a girl), and unfortunately dies in childbirth. Keiichi is soul-crushed and cannot bear to even look at the two children, so he entrusts them to Urd and moves out of the temple. Five years passed, and Keiichi lost all contact with any of his Heavenly relatives, and has deteriorated into a life of drinking, smoking, and gambling. He is unable to continue working at Whirlwind and as a result quits, falling deeper and deeper into depression. One day, Urd suddenly reappears and meets him, and shows him the now slightly more grown up children. The very sight of them crushed his heart, and he vehemently refuses to start taking care of them, citing his lack of work and poor living conditions. Urd begs him to give them a chance, and he reluctantly starts trying to get along with them. One month passes, and Urd tells Keiichi that she is going to take him to Heaven to see something he hadn't ever laid his eyes on. He is confused, but agrees to follow her. In Heaven, he is taken to Belldandy's grave which is a gigantic golden monument sitting inside of Heaven's most beautiful garden in the Almighty's property. Laying his eyes upon the monument and remembering his promises, Keiichi breaks down in front of the grave and vows to take care of the children in the manner the goddess would approve of, and vows to turn his life around in her memory. Soon, the two children come to live with him, and now the simple human man finds himself taking care of two very unusual children, all the while trying to hide their uniqueness from the world. From there, his trials and tribulations begin.

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Urd    52
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I actually like the Civil War idea a lot.

 

Even thou i have my doubts that Urd would side with the pro-Gate side. I mean, if it wasn't for the gate, her mother and her father would still be together and she would have been able to enjoy a "normal" childhood, so ..yea, there's that.

Skuld would probably just end up siding with them as well, in a "if you're going, i'm going style".

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solopy567    23
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Well, the thought I had in mind was that due to Belldandy's 'betrayal', the pro-Gate faction will start to slander both Skuld's and Urd's names due to their relation to her. Due to the fact that the pro-Gate faction is run by Tyr, this slander could potentially cause them to usurp him and she most definitely does not want that. In order to protect their family's unity as well as their reputation, Urd has no choice but to renounce her relation to Belldandy so she can protect Skuld, who is still unprepared for a volatile situation such as a civil war.

 

All in all, the situation I'm trying to create is an inevitable split in the household that causes Urd and Belldandy to be on opposite sides. I'm not sure how realistic the scenario I painted is though, but anything that can cause that in my mind will work. I tried thinking how possible is it to make it seem more personal on Urd's side, but that just won't happen easily.

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HotelKatz    46
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I once had a plan to write something similar to Belldandy the Yandere for my what-if fic.

 

The plot of it was that Belldandy would have always had a Yandere side, only fully brought out by Keiichi.

 

I would have done my best to only hint at it with these three clues. Urd never would have arrived, Skuld would only visit once and declare Keiichi and Belldandy as Husband and wife before leaving quickly, and Mara would have been terrified once she realized that her mission was to separate Belldandy from Keiichi,

 

As for "AMG Civil war" I see Belldandy supporting Pro-gate because she is willing to defend Tyr throughout the series, except when her interests do not coincide .

 

Skuld and Urd going anti-gate because Urd already has to deal with one major obstacle of her heritage and she changed her mind after the series ended after thinking about it. As for Skuld, She may worship Belldandy, but she's closer to Urd in her feelings.

 

At best, Skuld might be Pro-Gate at first, but changes after Urd plays dirty by talking about Sentaro.

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solopy567    23
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Well, if they had a choice in the matter then yes, they would join those parties.

 

The plotline I gave pretty much gives them no choice so they go to the factions they are more or less forced to support. Keiichi was taken by the anti-Gate, so to protect him Bell will go anti-Gate.

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Urd    52
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Why not have the opposite? Have them all on the anti-Gate brigade first, and then have Belldandy jumping the boat and going over to the pro-Brigade after.

 

Have someone from the pro-side kidnaping Keiichi instead, since they were starting to become greatly outnumbered. So they played cheap and kidnapped him, since they knew they would have Belldandy with that move.

 

I just can't find decent explanations for Urd and Skuld to be on the pro side...on the anti-side however. Looooot's of ammunition there.

As to why Belldandy would firstly start on the anti-side?

 

Well, you could say Belldandy feels that it caused too much pain to the ppl who crossed it and failed it. They should have been given the chance to fail for themselves, not having that chance stripped from them before they could even attempt to make it work.

It would make her a more "human" character imho. Even if she passed the test herself, she would recognize it is something cruel and unforgiving, and doesn't want ppl to suffer that.

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solopy567    23
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Well, I think having Belldandy on the 'anti Heaven' side would be more interesting. Part of my original idea includes Belldandy being on Celestine's side while opposite to Urd's. 

 

Initially, the Morisato Household is unaffiliated with any of the factions, but start splitting after Keiichi is kidnapped by anti forces. It is then that Belldandy joins them in order to protect him. Following her alleged 'defection', the pro faction in Heaven start talks of usurping Tyr and overthrowing the 'royal' bloodline, so in order to protect the integrity of their Heavenly house Urd joins the pro faction. It's not that they believe in the cause of the factions, but rather have people inside them that they must protect, and as a result it inevitably puts them at odds with each other.

 

All in all Heaven is treated as a monarchy.

 

But maybe it does make more sense to have them flipped.

 

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solopy567    23
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Okay so after reading a crossover fanfic on ffnet (whose name I won't say to not spoil), it brought to mind an interesting concept.

 

How would you realistically make Belldandy the antagonist in a story? Not a villain because it's impossible to give her nefarious plans without going super out of character, but just an antagonist who stands against the main characters.

 

A few ideas I had were the obvious mind control plot, but that would make her more a damsel in distress. You could also go the yandere route which is certainly believable.

 

What are some ideas you got?

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vanagandr    209
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13 minutes ago, solopy567 said:

Okay so after reading a crossover fanfic on ffnet (whose name I won't say to not spoil), it brought to mind an interesting concept.

 

How would you realistically make Belldandy the antagonist in a story? Not a villain because it's impossible to give her nefarious plans without going super out of character, but just an antagonist who stands against the main characters.

 

A few ideas I had were the obvious mind control plot, but that would make her more a damsel in distress. You could also go the yandere route which is certainly believable.

 

What are some ideas you got?

Here's a few possible scenarios that might result in her being an antagonist: 

 

Arriving too late. 

Some other goddess (be it Peorth or someone else altogether) got to grant Keiichi's wish first, and Belldandy gets in a situation like Peorth did in the series. 

 

Tempted by the devils.

A variation of the above, where Keiichi was first approached by the demons (whether it's Mara, Hagall, Hild, or some other demoness) and Belldandy tries to get him back. 

 

Born from the ashes.

Keiichi lived and died, and then after many years is being revived by Hild as a low level demon. Naturally, Belldandy wants to get him back, although Hild to keep them apart for a while. Of course, she might have an agenda of her own, but for the most part, it causes Belldandy to act antagonistically. 

 

Now all the above are more or less quite obvious and straightforward. If you wish you can even go into a different kind of scenario (without even having Keiichi in the equation), then it kind of depends on what's the story setup will be. However the easiest one of that is...

 

Her mother's daughter.

Basically, Belldandy took over Ansuz's job as the Intimacy Romance Inquisitor and ends up being the antagonist to another couple of immortals (or an immortal/mortal couple). Bonus points if her own past (or present, if Keiichi's still alive) is brought up and they call her out for being an unsympathetic goddess. 

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HotelKatz    46
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Bell as an antagonist?

 

That's honestly something I've always wanted to write. I've strayed near it, but never really committed.

 

Truth be told, most fans of A!MG would have an easier time swallowing the story, if the fic was fourth-wall-breaking and even had Belldandy let the audience know she was only playing the role of an antagonist, and everyone else was also playing a role in a story like an actor.

 

As for plots...

 

Belldandy the Yandere is the easiest to write.

 

Unwittingly antagonist is the nest easiest. Write from an oc's point of view as they try to keep up with the neighbors. (which in this case is Belldandy) Or a crossover with the protagonist as a perfectionist or someone who doesn't like being upstaged so easily as Belldandy often does. Use 'Belldandy's excellent in everything' as a downside to her character. Imagine taking years to learn a craft... only for someone to come by and outperform you on their first try.

 

A jekyll-and-hyde story, where Belldandy can be both the protagonist and antagonist! Use an accident from Urd's potions, or one of Skuld's inventions goes on the fritz. Perhaps even Mara's genetic manipulations comes back and whips up a virus to do it.

 

BTW, I read a couple of fanfics where Belldandy did go Yandere for Keiichi. Might be where I got the wish to write such a thing.

 

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