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vanagandr

Ah! The lost contract

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HotelKatz

Managed to get around to reading this. Free time seems to slip from my hands as of late.

 

Liked the chapter and the mental image of Hild in that sweater. Simply delicious.

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IdiAmeanDada
1 hour ago, HotelKatz said:

Liked the chapter and the mental image of Hild in that sweater. Simply delicious.

 

I know, right?!?  :D

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vanagandr
12 hours ago, HotelKatz said:

Managed to get around to reading this. Free time seems to slip from my hands as of late.

 

Liked the chapter and the mental image of Hild in that sweater. Simply delicious.

Thanks Katz! Since this arc is loosely based around Peorth's from the manga, I thought that I could take some more liberties here and there. Also, I'm kind of surprised how successful that idea appears to be. Perhaps I was onto something good :biggrin:

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solopy567

Phew, reread the whole thing because I forgot how the plot went.

 

Well, as they say it's about time they got it on!

And damn you for this cliffhanger. Reaction chapters are always difficult to wait for.

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vanagandr
6 hours ago, solopy567 said:

Phew, reread the whole thing because I forgot how the plot went.

 

Well, as they say it's about time they got it on!

And damn you for this cliffhanger. Reaction chapters are always difficult to wait for.

Well, after spending so much time on various other arcs, I thought that I had to move back to the main one, and made some progress for Keiichi and Bell. 

Plus I had this idea on what to do with the Test, as I didn't want to follow the same approach as the manga (for variety's sake), so I threw a bit of a curveball there, with Hild's curse.

 

And on a different note, this is the first time in my stories where Keiichi gets to meet Belldandy's father in a more traditional setting (as far as meeting his perspective father in law is concerned). Add the fact that Belldandy cannot lie, and you can expect a pretty interesting discussion ;)

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vanagandr

While unrelated to the story itself, this is actually one of the things I've mentioned in a previous chapter, and... it kind of happened:

AMG Hild the VirginKiller

So, lo and behold, this is Hild in a virgin Killer sweater! :D

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vanagandr

Chapter 33 is on FFN: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11068984/33/Ah-The-lost-contract

Also, I would like to announce that this is actually the finale of this story, although I do have an epilogue to write before I call this series properly finished. 

I had a lot of fun writing this story, and I hope that it was an interesting read so far, especially with the whole wedding taking place in the last chapter. It sure took me forever to write all that, since i was far too indecisive with several of the details, as well as removing anything that I felt extraneous and boring, so, in the end I spent too much time on this and kind of neglected my two other stories. 

Still, my reasoning was that it was time well spent, since I wanted a proper ending for this story, instead of just getting it over with. We kinda had that already happen with AMG as well, so, the last thing I needed was to repeat a hurried ending. Which is also why I'm planning to write an epilogue too. 

Until then, I hope you've enjoyed this story.

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